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Totally terrific. You painted a masterpiece of vivid colors, with sounds and smells as you wrote: Scraping and sparking all the way to the end of the line on bent rims and a broken GPS.

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I appreciate your support of my work, and insights into what stands out to you. This is one of my favorite lines in this one, as well.

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Thanks kindly, Caroline.

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